Bob Dolan :D
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Join date: Oct 2012
163 IQ
#2
Wasnt very sure what to expect, but i was pleasantly surprised!
Good job man!
shortyafter
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Join date: Jul 2007
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#3
Dang dude that's killer I think your new writing style paid off. Excellent song rock on.
Izolus
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Join date: Oct 2012
33 IQ
#4
Yeah, I agree with the guys above. It's got quite a nice style to it as well
bsantos_5
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Join date: Jan 2004
965 IQ
#5
I will echo the others. It has a cool vibe to it. First thing that came to mind was "Can't You See" by Marshall Tucker Band. Probably not what you were going for but I'd bet I'm older than you.
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elementwood89
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Join date: Mar 2004
1,337 IQ
#6
Thanks for the replies guys! Listening to it now I can definatly hear 'Can't You See' in a way, ha not my intention but I do like Marshall Tucker Band.
Paraffinity
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Join date: Apr 2012
243 IQ
#7
Pretty good tune. Got better as it went along and it was nice to listen to. I personally wouldn't have had the lead guitar come in so early so to let the song build up more in intensity. Also, the mixing and EQ could do with some tweaking. Some parts reminded me slightly of Sparklehorse, but with extra guitar... don't know if that's just me. Anyway, there honestly is much potential here! Keep up the good work.
The Revival
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Join date: Oct 2012
21 IQ
#9
I actually really dug that, kind of had that 90's vibe to it. Reminded me more of "Change" by Blind Melon than "No Rain". Then it took that whole cool turn at the end. Vocals could be a little louder so I could understand at 1:09, unless it was more intended as just adding an atmospheric layer. I couldn't tell.

Critique my band's music video if you want, both the audio and visual
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1567733