StreetBass252
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2011
269 IQ
#1
Hey Guys, this is a slow, but quiet heavy Song, about Martyrs, and what they go through. Constructive Critics would be nice, if you want I do C4C


what gives him the power to believe?
what gives him the power to hold on?
what makes his will so unbreakable?
he does it for his god till he's gone

the god of the martyr
why doesn't he save him?
the heart of the martyr
sacrificing himself
the god of the martyr
why doesn't he save him?
the mind of the martyr
is full of conviction

how can he bear the pain he goes through?
nothing here can hold him from his plan
if his god calls him to, he will do
the relationship of god and man

the god of the martyr
why doesn't he save him?
the heart of the martyr
sacrificing himself
the god of the martyr
why doesn't he save him?
the mind of the martyr
is full of conviction

he's so strong
he carries on
till he is done
he believes in his confession

the god of the martyr
why doesn't he save him?
the heart of the martyr
sacrificing himself
the god of the martyr
why doesn't he save him?
the mind of the martyr
is full of conviction
DLittle
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2012
31 IQ
#2
Very nice, what type of music would these be set to?
StreetBass252
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2011
269 IQ
#3
Thank you . I imagined it as kind of a Metal Ballad like Fade to Black by Metallica.
DLittle
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2012
31 IQ
#4
That would be awesome! Keep up the great work!