lububble17
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Join date: Jul 2012
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#1
Hello...wrote this song a while ago. I would love some feedback
VERSE 1
The words etch into your brain
You can’t handle the pain
You think you’re going insane
Can you keep playing the part?
It has shattered your heart
And now it’s broken and scarred.

CHORUS
Will the bleeding ever stop?
Will the bleeding ever stop?
Now you feel you’re at the top
And spiraling down, out of control

And wouldn’t it be nice
If it would all end in the blink of an eye
But the whole world is calling you back,
And now it’s time to fade the black.

VERSE 2
Lying in your bed at night
A sea of tears falling out your eyes
You think you could drown
And you wouldn’t even make a sound

Shadows running through your mind
But it really ain’t your time
There’s a new world there for you
I’m begging you please, please push through

*REPEAT CHORUS*

BRIDGE
It is so hard to close that door
And look ahead to something more
Like it never even happened, though it did
You’ve got to love, learn and live

*REPEAT CHORUS (SOFTLY)*

Yes, the whole world is calling you back dear
And now it’s time to fade the black.
Last edited by lububble17 at Nov 8, 2012,