rushmore
bblblubluewhale
Join date: Jan 2007
3,870 IQ
#1
oh,
all the big
trees/
no snow no
sleet no
sleeves,
that which
accompanies the
growth of
me(
bearded in
wander.
i sit,
sometimes,
other times
walk/
eyes glass'd with
another someones
thought; limbs
carrying me along,
mind tired, lazy,
dumb &
gone.
Arthur Curry
UnBanned
Join date: Apr 2006
2,268 IQ
#2
this is really beautiful man. i think it reads better without "sleet no" but who am i to say?

good work
Last edited by Arthur Curry at Nov 12, 2012,
vintage x metal
Brown-Thighed Girl
Join date: Sep 2006
5,308 IQ
#3
ooh. and I like sleet.
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LOOKtheskyfell!
That sort of thing...
Join date: Feb 2005
559 IQ
#4
really dug it. you've got a nice Langston Hughes meets John Keats vibe going on. really wonderful to read and think about. happy thanksgiving, man!
jiminizzle
Lost Pilot
Join date: May 2006
2,775 IQ
#7
Quote by LOOKtheskyfell!
really dug it. you've got a nice Langston Hughes meets John Keats vibe going on. really wonderful to read and think about. happy thanksgiving, man!


woah another ghost! hope you've been doing well.


On topic, this is really nice. You're good with controlling sounds.
Anatomy Anatomy
Whale Blue Review

Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
prada99
Banned
Join date: Nov 2012
10 IQ
#8
my poetry review tumblr-submit poetry for publishing on the page. contact me if you'd like to help me with this.

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