#1
oh,
all the big
trees/
no snow no
sleet no
sleeves,
that which
accompanies the
growth of
me(
bearded in
wander.
i sit,
sometimes,
other times
walk/
eyes glass'd with
another someones
thought; limbs
carrying me along,
mind tired, lazy,
dumb &
gone.
#2
this is really beautiful man. i think it reads better without "sleet no" but who am i to say?

good work
Last edited by Arthur Curry at Nov 12, 2012,
#3
ooh. and I like sleet.
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#4
really dug it. you've got a nice Langston Hughes meets John Keats vibe going on. really wonderful to read and think about. happy thanksgiving, man!
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really dug it. you've got a nice Langston Hughes meets John Keats vibe going on. really wonderful to read and think about. happy thanksgiving, man!


woah another ghost! hope you've been doing well.


On topic, this is really nice. You're good with controlling sounds.
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Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
#8
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