jjfeu662
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Join date: Jun 2012
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#1
I came up with this verse for a song. The following was thought up by me, and if it exists already, it's a coincidence.

We're on a manhunt and you b***h is doomed
We have your a*s right where we want you
Get ready for a long and f**king painful ride
Cause you might manage to run but you sure as hell can't hide

Cause we're on a manhunt (nu na nah nunanuh nu na nuh)
Yeah we're on a manhunt (nu na nah nunanuh nu na nuh)

I got a nightstick in my left hand and a pistol in my right
I'm a mothef***ing cop and damn straight I bite
Try to run away from me and I'll shoot
'cause I'm a bad motherf***er who's out to get you

It's about a bad cop in charge of a manhunt or something and is very loosely based on GTA An Andreas.

I also came up with a riff to go with it

0--3--5--010--0--6--5
0--3--5--010--0--6--5
0--3--5--010--0--6--5

^ that is played on the bottom 3 strings of some kind of drop tuning, muted during the verse then open between.

Anyone have anything to say about it or something to add?
Tomorrow will take us away
Far from home
No one will ever know our names
But the bards' songs will remain
Tomorrow will take it away
The fear of today
It will be gone
Due to our magic songs

ALL HAIL CELESTIA
Last edited by jjfeu662 at Nov 13, 2012,
whywefight
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#2
Yeah.... that nu-metal was so inbred in the early 2000's that even if this song was terrible, you might've made it big.
TheBigOne44
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#3
Quote by jjfeu662

Anyone have anything to say about it or something to add?


Nu-Metal is like Santa. It's awesome when you're 10
Lyrax
I need a weapon.
Join date: May 2011
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#5
**** the haters! Let`s bring the nu-metal back!
Dude, add some more and send it to me
I`ve got some nu-metal lyrics on "my blogs" part of my page. Check it out!

Keep the nu-metal alive bro!
Dissonance is underrated.
jjfeu662
Celestia
Join date: Jun 2012
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#6
Nu metal is metal combined with rap, right? You could growl the lyrics and it's metalcore, or add some record scratches and it's rap metal.

That's not my main genre, nu metal, but my thrash songs are less developed than this one.
Tomorrow will take us away
Far from home
No one will ever know our names
But the bards' songs will remain
Tomorrow will take it away
The fear of today
It will be gone
Due to our magic songs

ALL HAIL CELESTIA
Lyrax
I need a weapon.
Join date: May 2011
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#8
Quote by jjfeu662
Nu metal is metal combined with rap, right? You could growl the lyrics and it's metalcore, or add some record scratches and it's rap metal.

That's not my main genre, nu metal, but my thrash songs are less developed than this one.


No please don`t mix growl into it! Not metalcore-ish growl. Or let him mix whatever he wants, nu-metal is after all a mix of genres.

The nu-metal I write and like are those with rapped verses and heavy refrains. And also weird bridges that could be really groovy or have this little stick that builds up and go into a last altered refrain.

Just listen to Stuck from Limp Bizkit and you`ll see what I mean
Dissonance is underrated.
jjfeu662
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Join date: Jun 2012
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#9
Verse added
Tomorrow will take us away
Far from home
No one will ever know our names
But the bards' songs will remain
Tomorrow will take it away
The fear of today
It will be gone
Due to our magic songs

ALL HAIL CELESTIA
jjfeu662
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Join date: Jun 2012
1,996 IQ
#12
Quote by lillianyang
Oh, great article! I will keep this post.Thank you for all the nice shares.


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I'm not sure what's so fun about posting thousands of messages for no reason...
Tomorrow will take us away
Far from home
No one will ever know our names
But the bards' songs will remain
Tomorrow will take it away
The fear of today
It will be gone
Due to our magic songs

ALL HAIL CELESTIA
Lyrax
I need a weapon.
Join date: May 2011
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#13
That dude or thing commented on one of my poems and then I saw it comment on other shit with the same thing. What`s up with the song by the way?
Dissonance is underrated.
jjfeu662
Celestia
Join date: Jun 2012
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#14
Quote by Lyrax
What`s up with the song by the way?

I have other stuff on my mind than songwriting... also having trouble thinking up other verses.
Tomorrow will take us away
Far from home
No one will ever know our names
But the bards' songs will remain
Tomorrow will take it away
The fear of today
It will be gone
Due to our magic songs

ALL HAIL CELESTIA