Nardis
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2012
10 IQ
#1
I wrote these to the melody of Miles Davis' "Blue in green". All feedback appreciated.

Rain pours down
upon the window
marring the melancholy view
i know
whispering a tune
of sorrow
for you I wallow
In seas
Of blues and greens
dream of the days of you
and me
but surely wake tomorrow
in all these
blues and greens