#2
I dont think the repeats were necessary..

Decent sounding relaxed song though, but needs something to change before it repeats itself.
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#6
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If you could upload an mp3 that would be wonderful.

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#8
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>gp5

lolno.


I have a gpx file if you would prefer that. What do you use?
#9
Disconcertingly slow tempo, made me feel really uneasy, almost angry.
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#10
Quote by frankibo
Disconcertingly slow tempo, made me feel really uneasy, almost angry.


Oops, just saw that. It's not actually meant to be played at 30 bpm.

I originally composed it at 150 bpm, and you should listen to it at this tempo.
#11
I think I preferred it at 30bpm. 15 seemed too fast for me. Granted 3 was so slow it hurt but I liked it more. It would make a very interesting interlude in an album or a song. I like it.