USCENDONE BENE
I want pure energy
Join date: Jun 2006
1,746 IQ
#1
Hey there, i'm looking for some pointers on my cover so I can improve it as i'll probably re-record it at some point (likely to be when I get my cast off). There are a few timing issues for sure, and maybe a few voice lessons are required but anything specific would be greatly appreciated!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IP6weza5R-o&feature=plcp

Please let me know what you think, I look forward to hearing from you
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PSimonR
PSR
Join date: Nov 2010
83 IQ
#3
Yeah, its cool.

Your voice is good pitch wise but sounds a little breathless and short. Just a few lessons with a singing coach could sort that.

I prefer a more finger style strumming pattern on this song - there's a few lessons on Youtube that cover this. (might not be possible with the cast on?)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xlkC7gl6s3s

or

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2T4MShSWVuI

I like this version to

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5o1whMYKRs0&feature=plcp

and this

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wRCPCNtViGA&feature=fvwrel
BENDO789
Registered User
Join date: Jun 2009
198 IQ
#5
This is a really good cover, personally I would recommend lowering it a bit. You're hitting all the notes fine but as someone else said you sound a little out of breath. It might be that you're a bit out of your comfort zone. I really enjoyed this anyway!
BigSmokeDawg
Yes We Nyan!
Join date: May 2011
1,128 IQ
#7
Sorry for the late reply!

I really like the lyrics in this I can't really say much about your singing because I know absolutely nothing about it myself haha. Mad props for playing with a cast too, that takes some really motivation haha My playing is crippled by a cut thumb or finger, so I can't imagine what a cast you do :P Hope that all works out soon for you!

Nice song! I enjoyed it!
Last edited by BigSmokeDawg at Dec 2, 2012,