vintage x metal
Brown-Thighed Girl
Join date: Sep 2006
5,308 IQ
#1
I thought of a friend
(you can maybe guess who)
who I used to spend time with
when I wasn't with you
- I loved how he laughed
and how he'd get sad
and hold up my head
in his clammy hands -
and under my breath, the building hum
'I will make you come
I will make you come.'
Quote by Arthur Curry
it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




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theguitarist
minterman22
tateandlyle
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kdownes
one among the Fence
Join date: Dec 2006
2,587 IQ
#2
Somehow you always make the most simple, basic things seem deep, and rich and interesting. Your work is definitive proof that less is nearly always more.
vintage x metal
Brown-Thighed Girl
Join date: Sep 2006
5,308 IQ
#3


you are sweet.
Quote by Arthur Curry
it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




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theguitarist
minterman22
tateandlyle
& alaskan_ninja

21wickwing
wick2107
Join date: Feb 2009
1,487 IQ
#5
Quote by #1 synth
i meant to say something sooner
but i couldnt find words
your command of love poetry
is simply absurd


This.

haha this poem was a great read. Thank you for posting it. I am trying to master love poetry and it helps to read such poems.