KoLdDoOm
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2012
21 IQ
#1
Hi all, recently made a demo/WIP version of a metulz song that I've been working on, and would really appreciate some feedback if any of you guys want to have a listen! I wrote all the instruments, played them and programmed synths/drums. I also did the vocals, but I didn't write the lyrics.

https://soundcloud.com/kolddoom/rejection-of-regiment-demo

A couple of things, I'm not a vocalist by any means, but I wanted to make a version for demo purposes, and to show my buddy, who may be doing the vox in the final version, how I envisaged it to be timing-wise.

It's by no means finished, and pretty rough around the edges in production, but I'd appreciate both positive and negative comments about it!

This song was written in a totally different way to anything I've done before, and I'm not sure how I feel about the flow, but the structure (or lack of) was loosely decided at a very early stage around the lyrics.

Cheers!
aaron aardvark
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2010
4,896 IQ
#2
Ko,
Death metal vocals are not my thing, though yours seem OK for the genre (I usually much prefer melodic singing though your melodic singing is a bit pitchy). Guitar playing is reasonably tight overall (could be tighter at times though), the guitar riffs are my favorite part of the song. I play synths, but I'm not sure yours really fit the song. Drums are good for the genre. Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=30732509#post30732509