Hi all, recently made a demo/WIP version of a metulz song that I've been working on, and would really appreciate some feedback if any of you guys want to have a listen! I wrote all the instruments, played them and programmed synths/drums. I also did the vocals, but I didn't write the lyrics.


A couple of things, I'm not a vocalist by any means, but I wanted to make a version for demo purposes, and to show my buddy, who may be doing the vox in the final version, how I envisaged it to be timing-wise.

It's by no means finished, and pretty rough around the edges in production, but I'd appreciate both positive and negative comments about it!

This song was written in a totally different way to anything I've done before, and I'm not sure how I feel about the flow, but the structure (or lack of) was loosely decided at a very early stage around the lyrics.

Death metal vocals are not my thing, though yours seem OK for the genre (I usually much prefer melodic singing though your melodic singing is a bit pitchy). Guitar playing is reasonably tight overall (could be tighter at times though), the guitar riffs are my favorite part of the song. I play synths, but I'm not sure yours really fit the song. Drums are good for the genre. Perhaps you could review my music at this link: