#2
you have a lot of excessive mouth/tongue movement which distorts your vowels. It would be reminiscent of what you hear in punk/pop songs. Try landing cleaner on the note instead of doing so much sliding to and from notes. If you hit your consonants harder, this will help the issue.
#3
Nice stuff man, I remember seeing some of you previous videos I like it, but I agree with cgilli in that you should probably try to reduce the excessive mouth movement... but you have a good voice, plenty of potential for a KILLER voice

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#4
Thanks for the comments guys, and I'll see if I can fix my excessive mouth movement problem lol I never really noticed it before, it's just how I sing