Give the bass more presence in the mix, it's really important to your song structure I feel so why not treat it that way, you know? I really dig the Lawrence of Arabia vibe dude. The part where you start to say "straddling the line between my death and my design", you gotta make those rhythm guitars more distinct in the mix because that's a dramatic shift in the song that happens there. Get things a little tighter and I know people that would bang this track in the car stereo right now.

Check out my demo, it's not that long. Let me know what you think.
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hey i really appreciate the feedback. Yea this is not complete yet. We def wanna bring out the bass more. It's a huge part of the song.

Ameliorate was pretty damn chill. I dog it. Purple Lavender was cool but I couldnt understand the lyrics much haha. All good though. Cream Dream is really tight. I enjoy this one a lot. Overall your album is very distinct and eclectic. I enjoy it a lot! I sent a like your way on facebook!