LostLegion
32CSM
Join date: Oct 2010
2,216 IQ
#1
Falling off the edge of life
While you're young
Take one small step from the light
While you're young.

I need to feel your touch
Hand to hold
But now I spend my nights
Oh so cold.

Chorus:And I only wish you had not gone
But life just keeps on moving on
So I hope you'll live on in song. x2

What did you think of me in life?
Was I a wrong?
You don't know much I miss you
Now that you're gone.

I can only see your face
On the card
Your voice is a distant memory
Will it last long?

And I only wish you had not gone
But life just keeps on moving on
So I hope you'll live on in song. x2

And I know I wasn't always there
But I hope there's a heaven up there
So you have a safe place to remain

Through the tears caused by the pain
I promise that one day
I'll be by your side now soon.
lububble17
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2012
77 IQ
#2
Beautiful! It flows really well...I'd love to hear it as a song!