#2
Quote by Rockul
Would like to hear any opinion. Still in progress.

And check my previos tunes please.
http://soundcloud.com/egorlappo

Reminds me of btbams alaska album mixed with periphery's ep.
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#3
Quote by Cloudkicker
Reminds me of btbams alaska album mixed with periphery's ep.


Thank you. Started discovering BTBAM recently. Colors and Parallax II - soundtrack to december and this january. Alaska is next.
..your nickname is cool.
#4
Cheers for listening to mine. I was enjoying the the first two dozen bars or so. Around 30 bars in I felt it was losing steam though. Sounded like a cross between Periphery and BTBAM to me. Keep going man.
#5
Largely horrendous drum part ruins it for me.
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#6
Quote by frankibo
Largely horrendous drum part ruins it for me.


What would be better? Blastbeating throughout?
#7
Too much influence, not enough original writing. I dont think the drums parts were that bad, they fit at least. But it just sounds too much like Periphery.
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#8
Quote by Rockul
What would be better? Blastbeating throughout?


Not at all, I hate that too.
When writing this sort of music the drums have to hold a groove to keep the music coherent. This is a mess.
I don't think it's great aside from the drums anyway, the whole thing is a bit of a mess. There's potential there though.
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#9
Quote by frankibo
Not at all, I hate that too.
When writing this sort of music the drums have to hold a groove to keep the music coherent. This is a mess.
I don't think it's great aside from the drums anyway, the whole thing is a bit of a mess. There's potential there though.


You're right, parts are divided a bit. It's just the first thing i GP'ed ever, due to temporary inability to record anything real. So it's difficult to compose without Cubase and feeling of real thing.
#10
Quote by Rockul
What would be better? Blastbeating throughout?

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#11
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Oh, how I love the smell of butthurt in the morning.


Wow, i thought butthurt is smth about yelling, not about asking with a tiny bit of irony.
Thanks for bumping though!