I really liked it when that wah wah wah wah thing came into the song, you fit that in perfectly and transitioned into it really well. I like the weird video game noises you got going on too shortly after that also. I'm not really sure how well this would work on an album, maybe as the opener or closer as it doesn't really have any defined structure, but its a nice fun song.

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