DancesWithSheep
Muchacho Moderno
Join date: Dec 2012
114 IQ
#3
The intro from zero to 0:30 sounds a little like "I Can't get no Satisfaction" without the heroin...

I'm a lyric and melody man - you have good bones here - will want to hear it when you add the vocs.

The guitar sounds are nice and fat.

Thanks for sharing!

If you haven't already -

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1580347


DWS
aaron aardvark
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2010
5,077 IQ
#4
Pyro,
Cymbals sound rather phase-y, but that could be an mp3 thing. Guitar riffs are good, most of the playing is fairly tight. Good you double-tracked the rhythm guitar. Guitar tone is good. Yep, this could use some vocals. I wish the electric bass stood out better when the guitar plays. Bass line is good. Good so far! Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1581578
Last edited by aaron aardvark at Jan 7, 2013,
Pyrotechie
Registered User
Join date: Jan 2009
809 IQ
#5
Quote by DancesWithSheep
The intro from zero to 0:30 sounds a little like "I Can't get no Satisfaction" without the heroin...

I'm a lyric and melody man - you have good bones here - will want to hear it when you add the vocs.

The guitar sounds are nice and fat.

Thanks for sharing!

If you haven't already -

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1580347


DWS

Appreciate it man, I like your stuff as well! I've got vocals down melody-wise but my singin isn't too top par. I'm hoping it blends into the mix well once I recieve it(sometime today, I hope)