Final
i'manevenworsemess.
Join date: Dec 2003
877 IQ
#1
drunk -

"deltitnu"

replace my organs with
circuits and wires;
the bipolarity of a manic depressive:
droll and garish yet weathered.
an automaton lavished with emotion,
confused as to a purpose,
portraying that of a human.
"the world seems a better place
when i'm not about."
- multiple system failure;
power down,
power down,
power dow..
po..
Carmel
Join date: May 2005
7,826 IQ
#7
What I loved about this piece is your word choice. How beautifully crafted are the words you chose to put out of and between quotation marks. That divide that puts us here or there. Mechanical or human, electronic or emotional. I connect to that on many levels. I have an iphone after all.

multiple system(s) bothered me. pedantic.

Good. good.
This is not a pipe