good cover dude. its always good to add your own stuff into covers. one thing Id recommend you work on is your vibrato because its way too fast. work on a slower vibrato, then after you got that work on adding some vibrato to bends. just my tips, great cover though.
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Thank you very much! That's just the sort of criticism I'm looking for. Just for someone to point out things that need working on. Thank you again, much appreciated!