Cyclones41
this too shall pass
Join date: Jul 2006
1,134 IQ
#1
I hardly ever write songs anymore. But I've written a couple in the past two days. This is the one I wrote this afternoon, so it's still a little rough. Here's the link to listen:

https://soundcloud.com/brett-rae-1/wholly-yours


Take these dry bones
Up from the ground
Fill me with breath
That’ll do nothing but praise you
Take these dry bones
Up from the ground
Give me new flesh
Make me wholly yours now

You only ask of me one thing
That’s to give you my life
And these days I’m faltering
No matter what I try
My body crumbles
‘Cause it’s turned into a hollow shell

But you take these dry bones
Up from the ground
Fill me with breath
That’ll do nothing but praise you
Take these dry bones
Up from the ground
Give me new flesh
Make me wholly yours now

When I’m at a loss for words
You give me truth to speak
And though I’m just a pile of dust
You continue to make me clean

'Cause you take these dry bones
Up from the ground
Fill me with breath
that'll do nothing but praise you
take these dry bones
up from the ground
give me new flesh
make me wholly yours now
treborillusion
UG Fanatic
Join date: May 2009
3,116 IQ
#2
Wow, first verse sounds like a spell.

Kinda cool though.
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look nigga, if you're chillin with 5 bros and 2 hos, you're gonna wanna pay attention to all of em equally. not moon over the hos forever and laugh at every shitty thing they say and just stare at them all night, like some of my mates do.