mktrevor
Tearing down stoplights.
Join date: Apr 2009
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#1
Hi Pit!

I've been experimenting with electronic music for awhile, mostly using FL Studio. I just finished a new song, and it would be incredibly helpful to get some feedback on it. Please let me know what you think I'm doing wrong and what (if anything) you think I'm doing right! Thanks!

Song is here: https://soundcloud.com/2xtoro/translation

-Trevor
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willT08
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Join date: Jul 2009
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#2
Search 'UG Electronic Label' in the searchbar and take it there
Saint78
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mktrevor
Tearing down stoplights.
Join date: Apr 2009
58 IQ
#4
Thanks willT08, I wasn't aware that there was a thread for this!
Smith and Weston Jr. was a son of a gun,
He pressed his nose up to my head,
I was sweating bullets but I dodged the one
That was not as much sweat as was lead.
willT08
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#6
Quote by mktrevor
Thanks willT08, I wasn't aware that there was a thread for this!

No problem dude. There's a nice little group of us who make all kinds of EDM and we're all fairly knowledgeable
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#7
Just followed you on SoundCloud mate

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you come up as a 13er now for me wtf?
OT:not my thing but pretty good for what it is IMO
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#11
Loving the salsa drums at 1:33 and the synth breakdown at 2:04. Don't really like the interlude at 4:16, and whats up with the static noise from 4:14 to 58:36? Anyway, great post techical brutal djenttrancethrashwoobwoob
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stratkat
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#12
It's a good start, keep at it TS. I also use FL studio:]

Use more paramic EQ, and your kicks are too distorted, once you get you mixes cleaner you can work on making your compositions fuller.