culex-knight
mon titre d'utilisateur
Join date: Jun 2004
400 IQ
#3
for an ots, 10/10
マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん 
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
 さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー 
じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching

the bartender
UG's biology teacher
Join date: Nov 2009
429 IQ
#7
These words are felt rather than read. Good job man.
You who build these altars now

To sacrifice these children
You must not do it anymore
Bleed Away
th.
Join date: Feb 2006
2,671 IQ
#8
This is really good! I also really enjoyed 'and yet we broke'.
Mulbery
KidCanary
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2007
157 IQ
#9
Not too sure about this one. Just seems very pretentious to me.
AngryGoldfish
do I "urk" you?
Join date: Jul 2005
6,605 IQ
#11
Welcome to the forum. Enjoy winning Writing of the Week. This was excellent.
ali.guitarkid7
Gets Easier
Join date: Oct 2009
2,302 IQ
#14
Quote by KidCanary
Not too sure about this one. Just seems very pretentious to me.

Pretentious as in, it's pretending that it knows what it's doing when it's not, or pretentious as in you don't know what it means?


Congrats on WotW, by the way!
Quote by Aeolian Harmony
Ali priori / Ali posteriori
Quote by GuitarGod_92
Jesus christ Ali is a nutcase

I actually feel sorry for him, like seriously, get help
AngryGoldfish
do I "urk" you?
Join date: Jul 2005
6,605 IQ
#15
Although I'm unsticking this thread, you should 'stick' around. Geddit?!