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#1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VqXx7LwKm_8

I'd love to hear some opinions on it!

See if you can spot the continuity errors, I find it pretty funny, it's so poorly made but that gives it a nice feel to it

The song is one of our own. I'm the guitary/singy man.

Would love to hear some thoughts.

=]
#2
Wrong sub-forum, you should know this. I kinda liked it though. It could be helped with a small tempo boost however. That's just my opinion.
#3
I didn't want to put it in the original recording one as it's more about the video(:

Is there another sub forum I should of looked for?

I thought The Pit was just general stuff, my bad!
#5
I agree about the tempo boost thing but not bad, not really my style but it was well-done and it seems like you had fun. The drummer makes me uncomfortable though, pulling sticks out of his nude ass.
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#6
The video is pretty well done, and the singing seems pretty good, on the negative side the song seems to meander a little bit much, and that distorted bass tone is awful
#7
Quite funny when the drummer pulled a stick out of the toilet.
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#10
Dat bass guitar, the only reason I kept watching

Not bad though
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#11
That was actually pretty awesome. The thing that got me though was when you played the solo you didn't use your pinky and that always just bothers me for whatever reason.
#12
Quote by Jimmy Blue
I didn't want to put it in the original recording one as it's more about the video(:

Is there another sub forum I should of looked for?

I thought The Pit was just general stuff, my bad!

I'd still say put it in the original recordings forum. Why? Because it technically is an original recording.

Edit:
Why did the singer's glasses disappear?...

Also, +1 on the tempo. That'd really give it more oomph, imho.
Last edited by crazysam23_Atax at Jan 23, 2013,
#13
havent seen it but i'll allow it here. you'll get criticism in this thread, just be cool about it, ts.
#14
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Edit:
Why did the singer's glasses disappear?....

comedic reasons
#15
I actually kinda liked it.

Tbh I had the mindset that it would actually suck

But the video was pretty good.

Some of the transitions are kinda eh but overall it was pretty well.

As for the music, I gotta agree with the other guys. The distorted bass has a horrible tone.
And the tempo change might be a good idea.

Otherwise, I actually like the song. Good job
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#16
That was a really good song!
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#17
I checked out your facebook page and your bandcamp. Your stuff is actually pretty neat. Looking forward to see a bright future from you guys.

http://tweaktheband.bandcamp.com/album/tweaks-ep

He's not allowed advertising his own stuff so that totes means I'm allowed to do it for him right >.>
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#22
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Do we have an Official UGers Music Thread of some sort here? That'd be neat.

It's in Promote Your Band.
#24
Hahaha well thanks to about 1/4 of you internet peeps.

The tempo change idea is interesting, so thanks!
#25
music videos in general are crap and uninteresting. Unless it's Daft Punk - Around the World.

sometimes I see us in a cymbal splash or in the sound of a car crash
#26
Quote by blake1221
Couldn't dig the song, but that's more a matter of tastes than anything else.

As far as the music video, thought it was pretty weak. A much more exciting, dynamic, less static way of filming all in the same room can be seen here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1K8AyLFbG0U


That's half the length of our video so I think unfair to compare in terms of how exciting it is! That one is a lot less likely to become boring!

That's just what I think, anyways. (:
#28
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Hahaha well thanks to about 1/4 of you internet peeps.

The tempo change idea is interesting, so thanks!

you're welcome
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But it wasn't funny; it was just random.

didn't say it was I guess
#29
Can people stop shamelessly promoting their stuff in their own threads?

Blake put out an EP that shits all over this and he just slightly mentioned it in the Chat thread.
#30
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didn't say it was I guess

Fair enough.

@will:
I agree. Or at least use "Promote Your Band", where this shit belongs. Hell, you can even put links in your sig, like me. But don't make a damn thread in the Pit about it.
#31
Nelsean already said he's cool with it being here. No-one really looks in promote your band anyway


plus, cool video, how do you keep your bathroom so neat and girlish.
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#34
Quote by Jimmy Blue
That's half the length of our video so I think unfair to compare in terms of how exciting it is! That one is a lot less likely to become boring!

That's just what I think, anyways. (:


All the more reason to find motivation to make yours more exciting, don't you think?

Plus, there's no arguing with how dynamic it was. It's shoddiness adds to its overall charm. They look like they had way more fun doing that, than you guys in your bathroom.

It's a silly, comical idea, but is that novelty really enough to run +3:00 and not get tiresome?


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Can people stop shamelessly promoting their stuff in their own threads?

Blake put out an EP that shits all over this and he just slightly mentioned it in the Chat thread.



:')
#35
i have the same question as whoomit
I just want to know that I did all I could with what I was given.
#36
Nice. That bass though, do not like.
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