so i made an attempt at a *chill* oasis type song. would anyone critique it please?

i got home from college one day and, for some reason, felt oddly relaxed.
so i turned on my mic and recorded how i felt.

i'm, however, not too good at the processing part on the computer

give me anything that stands out as something fixable please.

instruments used
Brawley, the threat, electric guitar
150 watt, line 6, spider 2 amp
Alvarez dreadnought acoustic guitar
D-drum set and brushes
Upload it to Soundcloud, Youtube's audio coding ruins tracks
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