so i made an attempt at a *chill* oasis type song. would anyone critique it please?

aroyy
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2011
10 IQ
#1
i got home from college one day and, for some reason, felt oddly relaxed.
so i turned on my mic and recorded how i felt.

i'm, however, not too good at the processing part on the computer

give me anything that stands out as something fixable please.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jnsHhM3kYTI&list=UUBcSjIV2_YY2LRIKbu5ENpg&index=7

instruments used
Brawley, the threat, electric guitar
150 watt, line 6, spider 2 amp
Alvarez dreadnought acoustic guitar
D-drum set and brushes
lockwolf
Recording's AdBot/Dick
Join date: Jun 2007
100 IQ
#3
Upload it to Soundcloud, Youtube's audio coding ruins tracks
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