Betaciao
Betaciao
Join date: Apr 2010
10 IQ
#1
Its the first song on my profile - http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Betaciao/

Its a rough cut, I just recorded everything in 15 minutes and had to use my cellphone headset mic as the microphone which turned out surprisingly well. I know the singing is not on point however I'm looking to see if you think it sounds like a good tune.

Gonna add vocal harmonies to the repeat of the 2nd chorus, extend the ending for a solo, and probably have it fade into a phased reverse reverb guitar with short extended delay times.

Lemme know what you think
ChrisBG
Registered User
Join date: Dec 2008
10 IQ
#2
Hey man

I think this is pretty sick actually, nice. There are some very cool ideas in this that stand out, some chord movements and melodies that are quite hooky and I actually really enjoyed this. Some cool triplet stuff!

Would love to hear a decent recording of it when you polish it up - the vocals actually sounded pretty nice to me, suits the style of music, and with a nice microphone and a bit more work this could be something special. Nice. Would be keen to hear those harmonies, could add a lot. Maybe a little bit of multitracking too.
Last edited by ChrisBG at Feb 1, 2013,
DancesWithSheep
Muchacho Moderno
Join date: Dec 2012
10 IQ
#3
Nice start - good voice!

Obviously the quality of the recording is not at issue, as this is a rough out...

Nice touch at 1:20...

Would love to hear the lyrics, can't catch them all, again, I realize this is a rough out.

Like the treatment of guitar at 2:00 to the finish.

Nice song. Please post the final version!

Listened to a couple of others on your page and like them. You have got some talent my friend...

Mine is at -

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=30987619#post30987619

Muchos Nachos!

DWS
Betaciao
Betaciao
Join date: Apr 2010
10 IQ
#4
Thanks a lot for the feedback. I'll definitively let you know when the final version is up. Here are the lyrics btw:

I'm so sorry
I couldn't be there
for you

I had the chance,
a chance
I blew

I gave it all away
for a chance to play the devil's stage
and now, I miss you

We could have been happy together
We could have been laughing together
We could have been happy together
We could have been wrapped in each other's arms

I was a fool
to think a son of the earth
and a girl from the stars could be cool

Cuz the forces that be
would never let me
leave from this place to be there, with you

We could have been happy together
We could have been laughing together
We could have been happy together
We could have been wrapped in each other's arms

We could have been happy forever
We could have been laughing forever
We could have been happy together
We could have been wrapped in each other's arms