Illustration
Iconoclast
Join date: Jan 2011
20 IQ
#1
Still pretty new to writing. This would be like my 3rd song.
Pretty basic stuff.

T'would be good to get some criticism.
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Last edited by Illustration at Feb 3, 2013,
NegiTom
Banned
Join date: Nov 2010
154 IQ
#2
So. Many. Open. Notes.
I don't understand why you would want to attempt to write deathcore, but congratulations, you succeeded in writing infallibly generic deathcore. You captured "da br00tz" of every other deathcore band perfectly with your breakdown, followed by breakdown, followed by breakdown.
chug-a-lug-dosomethingelse
Illustration
Iconoclast
Join date: Jan 2011
20 IQ
#3
Well I was going to title it Basicore but I didn't think the humour would be appreciated.
Last edited by Illustration at Feb 3, 2013,
CheesyMozarella
Slacker
Join date: May 2009
70 IQ
#4
It was very generic, but that doesn't matter as long as you learn something from it and don't write the same song next time. The first couple of songs are bound to be generic. It takes a while before you find "your style".
Last edited by CheesyMozarella at Feb 3, 2013,
Illustration
Iconoclast
Join date: Jan 2011
20 IQ
#5
Thanks man.
Really liked the stuff you wrote in the UG collabs.
Especially Bar 444 of 30 minute mark. That riff gave me chills the first time I heard it.