I believe I may be
losing my energy
between late night conversations
and that matutinal near-sleep state
in the right seat. Sometimes I dream
about carefree époques until
I’m awakened by a heartbeat
jumpstarting in anxiety.
At insomniac nights,
my inner voice repeats
autistic “I’m fine”’s
and I blindly believe
its therapeutic lies.
One day, I’ll wake up
wrapped in a peaceful haze
and life will seem okay,
not because I fixed it,
but because I tried to too late.
Isn't it "I'm fine's"? I think I did the same thing many moons ago and someone told me I was stupid for writing whatever I wrote in that way. I'm not saying you're stupid, it's just I was called out on it and I'm still feeling bitter.

"At insomniac nights" doesn't look or sound right. You can easily keep it there, but it may be a distraction for some people reading an otherwise decent piece.
Sounds good Kind of sad but that doesn't make it a bad piece.

I identify with this piece a lot lately. I wake up early in the morning feeling like death and it makes me apathetic.

Otherwise I don't know what to add. Keep up the good work.
You are now using UG Black.
You are now using UG Classic.

Listening to: This jazz piano music playing over the PA like wow for once it's good stuff they're playing

What if blue cheese is just regular cheese but it's accelerating towards you really fast?