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The genre is Progressive Death Metal with some Mathcore influences.


Verse 1

“Please heed me, It’s coming! Life-changing transitions will come”

Those were the only words I said before you decided to shut the door

Every single day the same routine, in every town the same response:

“We don’t need your oracles”; then it’s time to let this sphere renaissance



Pre-chorus

My forewarn remained ignored by those around me

Now look at the Armageddon striking upon thee



Chorus

Why can't you accept the aid that I provide?

Disagreeing with my prophecies, making me feel denied

Once you see doom among us, you will call my name in regret

But I'll be long gone, now say goodbye to your last sunset



Verse 2

Each one of my warnings stood unheard

Everyone glaring at me, calling me absurd

Controversy surrounds every one of my words

I recommend you to have your decimation as inferred!



Pre-chorus

The loss of monetary materials will be uncountable

While I will stare from above laughing as I’m unbreakable



Chorus

Why do you neglect the aid that I provide?

Disagreeing with my prophecies, making me feel denied

Once you see doom among us, you will call my name in regret

But I'll be long gone, now say goodbye to your last sunset

Compassion was my greatest mistake

Now all of your lives It will take.



*Breakdown*



Chorus

Why can't you accept the aid that I provide?

Disagreeing with my prophecies, making me feel denied

Once you see doom among us, you will call my name in regret

But I'll be long gone, now say goodbye to your last sunset



*Breakdown*

IT’S TIME TO LET THE DIVINATION COMMENCE



*Thunders, earthquakes and tsunami sounds*



Outro

Compassion was the greatest mistake of all

Now behold as I watch all your monuments fall

Unifying this worthless planet will be futile now

Your salvation is something that I will no longer allow

The High Command sent me to warn you of this punishment

But look at the results of ignorance; I’m sure you now repent
#2
Some monumental stuff here I think you managed to create this into a ok piece, without going to cliche. Perhaps some parts are, but I like how the story is told. I imagined this was about Nostradamus and his prophecies coming true or something like that hah

I have created... something in that same area when I think about it(right below). Check it out if you have time!
Last edited by Eccer at Mar 4, 2013,