#2
Hey. Good stuff, man. Enjoyed the song as a whole; good compositional movement. Piano interlude worked well as a breather right before the guitar solo came in. Might want the cymbal hit to be a little more pronounced to really make that transition hit hard. Your vocals kind of remind me of James LaBrie in his lower registry. I'd say that's a good thing.

The only gripe I'd have is the intro riff. A little too predictable in terms of it's progression and resolution: same pattern moving down the minor scale every measure. Don't get me wrong, it works well within the context of the song but I was able to predict where it was going mid way through the riff.

Overall, solid song. Diggin' it.

If you have time, check out my band's first EP on my post:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1591297
#4
I don't really listen to this kind of music, but I liked it. The intro is pretty cool, I like how you didn't just put the strings in the back but actually made them pretty prominent. I'm not sure if I think your voice is very fitting though, it's not very metal in my opinion (then again I don't listen to this kind of music a lot). Overall it's really cool, I actually like how your guitars are somewhat more quiet.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1591294 and https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1591294
Last edited by Soldier Poet at Mar 6, 2013,