The cough makes it.
I like your singing, especially the way you say 'High Ground' near the beginning. It's not very dynamic, but I enjoyed listening to it from start to end. Maybe you could add some picking part somewhere, I don't know.

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Last edited by Soldier Poet at Mar 6, 2013,
Theres a solo in there but I don't know what youtube did with it, shitty frequency range i guess, it was played quite high.
I'd recommend getting some better recording equipment because as it it feels like its clipping a lot and we're losing some of the clarity like that. I feel like there needs to be more variety in here, the song feels like one big sequence without much change in the feel or anything really. Like the other guy said, its not very dynamic at all and dynamics are very important part to music to help with the mood and overall feel. Maybe add in some light drumming or something else to spice things up?

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