#1
Working on a slow jm style song, would love to hear some opinions, I do crit for crit btw

Verse:
Tell me now
What have you found
A solitary moment
To which we are bound
For in this moment
You saw the light
Now spread your loving wings
And take to your flight
But it'll be a while For me
And my lonely fear of heights

Chorus:
And I've suddenly found
My heart's got me earthbound
And my love
Can't seem to find it's way back to you

Thanks so much guys!!
"When the power of love over comes the love of power the world will know peace."
~Jimi Hendrix
#2
Solid. Don't really have a lot of crit for it, unfortunately.

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#3
Really? I'm sort of on the fence about this song lol.
"When the power of love over comes the love of power the world will know peace."
~Jimi Hendrix