Cool, especially the part around 0:50. It's mellow and rocking at the same time. Your mix is great too (though maybe the right-panned guitar is a tiny bit too loud around 2:20), I really can't think of anything negative.

Could you listen to my songs too? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1591294 and https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1591294
Last edited by Soldier Poet at Mar 6, 2013,
I liked the dramatic opening with everything just coming in. Drums are a lot better than what I usually notice on here, really helps with the overall sound of the song. The fast riff that comes in at about 1:30 was really nice, and a great transition. There's nothing really wrong with the song, the guitar riffs might have gotten a little stale/generic near the end but nothing really worth complaining about. Drum sound is really nice and probably my favorite thing about the song. Not really sure if there is much you can do to improve the song here, its pretty damn good.

Critic back please https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1590976