#2
Groovy jam dude. Very enjoyable listen. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of the clean singing in a brutal jam like this, but who the **** am I? To everyone their own. What might make it a little more palatable for me would be some vocal layering/ harmonies. But again, who am I to tell you what to do with your style of music? Even though those bass drops are so cheesy and trite I can't help but dig them when they hit. haha.

The parts I really liked were the clean part at 1:35 and the following Veil of Maya-esque riff. The solo was cool too. Would have liked to have the volume a little higher on it.

Drums were programed right? If not, back off on the quantizing a bit... a little too robotic.

If you have time check out my band's latest jams from my post and tell me what you think. It's a totally different style but all of us use to be in a death metal band, so you'll probably hear some metal influence.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1591297
Last edited by moostifur at Mar 7, 2013,
#3
Quote by Ometh
As metal as a toilet bowl filled with shit.



Nice input man. Care to explain? What makes your metal so much more metal than mine?
No need to be a dick haha.