#1
...and I'm awake since I have slept through the whole day.

I want to write a song for this girl I met on a gig long time ago (she's sick because we've been doing some stuff outside when it was -4°C).

I might not be a good guitarist, but therefore I'm even worse poet. However, she sent me some of the poetry she wrote and said something like "I want somebody to write that beautifully to me...".
She is a grungy-alt-metal chick who is currently in the phase of adolescent depression and hates the whole world (just like me teehee ^_^ )

Anyone have an idea what should I write about? And melancholic topic?

Thanks in advance.
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#2
Write about how lame this thread is.
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#3
Why don't you just write a shitty song to go with her shitty poetry so you can both pretend to be impressed with each other's mediocrity.
#4
Write about killing yourself after murdering/raping her. Then turn that fiction into a non-fiction.
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#7
Tell her 'When the sun doth shine upon your face, illuminating your eyes as though they were distant stars something something' i forgot how it goes, but it works trust me
#8
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Tell her 'When the sun doth shine upon your face, illuminating your eyes as though they were distant stars, the dark spots in the middle of hte stars remind me of an anus, and i want to push my finger in it

FTFY?
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#10
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Write about everything in this thread.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1591540

Particularly comment #18. That one is pretty sexy.


I love you


But really, what did you write your songs about when you were 15? (and your gf was preferably 18[/brag]) ?
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Ahh yeah thats how it finished, thanks for that

Np, the brown ring poem is always fresh in my mind
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#14
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I love you


But really, what did you write your songs about when you were 15? (and your gf was preferably 18[/brag]) ?

I was personally too busy learning freaking crazy solos to write music.

But I do love nature. And I do love the idea of having a gf. So if I was 15 and wanted to write a song for my gf, I probably would've compared her to the beauty of nature. That probably sounds really cliche, but I'm no music writer, so I don't know.
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#15
tell her you want to do things to her sex organ
and the biggest sex organ is your brain(unless you got some really tiny brain or really huge dick)

tell her you want to open up her head and screw the soft grey matter
mind**** her with your dick
#16
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tell her you want to do things to her sex organ
and the biggest sex organ is your brain(unless you got some really tiny brain or really huge dick)

tell her you want to open up her head and screw the soft grey matter
mind**** her with your dick


Go home banana, you're smoothie.
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#20
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FTFY?


Maybe she has anal fetish? lol
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You get my first ever lolstack






The image in my head is just too funny for words at this point


Aw yeah.
#21
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Write about killing yourself after murdering/raping her. Then turn that fiction into a non-fiction.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EkwD5rQ-_d4


Really, write about how it was cold when you too were hanging out, but your soul is always warm when your with her or something like that. Fire and ice metaphors, bro.

Ice so cold,
fingers pain
Warm my soul
Be my flame

etc.
(You can use that if you want)

Then in the last verse imply that the chick in the song died of pneumonia.

Thank me when you've lost your v-card.
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#22
Quote by TheNameOfNoone
...and I'm awake since I have slept through the whole day.

I want to write a song for this girl I met on a gig long time ago (she's sick because we've been doing some stuff outside when it was -4°C).



wat
#23
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wat

+1

EDIT: That's poetry
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Y1dkCyGCws
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#26
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Really, write about how it was cold when you too were hanging out, but your soul is always warm when your with her or something like that. Fire and ice metaphors, bro.

Ice so cold,
fingers pain
Warm my soul
Be my flame

etc.
(You can use that if you want)

Then in the last verse imply that the chick in the song died of pneumonia.

Thank me when you've lost your v-card.


Well, this is actually pretty good. You're the first one who answered my question for serious, The Pit should have more people like you.

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wat

We were making out in the park because we couldn't go anywhere inside, and it was 2AM so it was cold as fuck. She noticed it was my first time, tho she liked it.
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#27
All my teenage angst involved me writing about murderous Serbs. Weird, amirite?
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#28
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All my teenage angst involved me writing about murderous Serbs. Weird, amirite?


Where the fuck did you grow up? Vukovar?
Don't give me political bullshit here, dude. I hate the whole croat-serb-muslim thing.

But seriously, are you really from ex-yugoslavia?
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You get my first ever lolstack






The image in my head is just too funny for words at this point


Aw yeah.
#29
Quote by TheNameOfNoone
...and I'm awake since I have slept through the whole day.

I want to write a song for this girl I met on a gig long time ago (she's sick because we've been doing some stuff outside when it was -4°C).

I might not be a good guitarist, but therefore I'm even worse poet. However, she sent me some of the poetry she wrote and said something like "I want somebody to write that beautifully to me...".
She is a grungy-alt-metal chick who is currently in the phase of adolescent depression and hates the whole world (just like me teehee ^_^ )

Anyone have an idea what should I write about? And melancholic topic?

Thanks in advance.

conceited much?
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#30
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All my teenage angst involved me writing about murderous Serbs. Weird, amirite?


Jebe se
#31
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Jebe se


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If women can be annoyed there arent any women incongress I should be allowed to be pissed off there are no members of pink floyd or the beatles in congress.