Hello everyone,

This is a new song of mine, adding to the collection (though its a bit of a mess). I'd like to have some thoughts on it, good or bad, as long as its constructive.


I've been writing and recording this for a few weeks at college and at home on Cubase. I recorded the vocals with a Shure SM58 through an M-Audio USB interface. The instrumental was also made on Cubase, with midi instruments.

I am not a civil engineer, though I have detailed lots of concrete foundations. And I saw the new "Oz" movie last night, so I think I have the proper qualifications to review this song Vocal melody is good though sometimes the vocals are a bit pitchy (I recommend Melodyne). For some reason, this reminds me of a James Bond theme song (a compliment). I like the synth stuff. Drums are OK, they fit the song. The song itself is good. Please review my music at this link: