#1
I.

the same light strained through cerulean sieve
your veins, your eyes
the sky, the sea
scattered columns that line the insides of my cheeks
blue raspberry tongue when I'm too shy to speak


II.

love is just sympathy,
the overwhelming urge that makes
beauty converge -
a oneness found through
the fingers and skull
that muddies the details
of corporeal world -
two pairs of eyes can read all sets of tongues
but once they are locked, everything only hums
and the volume between them will quiver and crack
until everything comes, until
everyone comes.
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#2
goddamn, you are so good. i think most people would say your strong point is your imagery. but i disagree. its your wonderful control of sonics and soft sounds that makes your poetry so readable and resonant.
#3
This was so good, Saadia. Dylan makes an interesting point. I've always thought of your poetry as very centered on imagery and that's usually what I notice first in it, but at least with this poem, the sonics took over and the imagery came after. I think it's a good thing. I hope you're doing well.
#5
Fantastic writing. You have a wonderful flow, the first is just a joy to read. The start of the second wasn't as natural a read for me, the last five lines are lovely though.
#7
Friggin AwEsOmE
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#8
thanks you so much everyone. I'm so happy these were enjoyed
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#9
haven't posted here yet, but, as usual, these were really good.
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