I saw no one was replying so I figured I'd take a look. This was a pretty cool guitar sound and riff and I liked the synth but the drums didn't seem to work with the other instruments at all. I know you might not have to many options for your drums but I would back off a little from the super processed kick overall generic drum sound and go with something a little more ambient. At least throw some ride symbol in there! Although the change in dynamics was cool at 55s in. Good work! Keep it going.