xbitmetal
Registered User
Join date: Aug 2009
289 IQ
#2
Ihan paska biisi! No läppäläppä..
Intro is too long. In my opinion. And drums could use some rework..
"Pre verse joku perse" on semi perseestä, koska sun transitio kusee ihan huolella. Sun pitää tehä tohon joku järkevä transitio toi tulee kämäsesti puun takaa.
Verse part is solid and calm. 74-77 needs something to back up bass, koska basso yksin on ihan anaalista. Vocals might fix the problem (?)

Jatka teos loppuun haluun kuulla, ihan lupaavan kuulosta. HYVÄ TOMMI!
BloodReverence
Registered User
Join date: Oct 2008
917 IQ
#3
I agree with everything xbitmetal said. I just came to say that the more of it I listened to, the more I was reminded of Tool. Really cool stuff man. Maybe layer in another guitar though?