#1
I don't ever want to grow up.
Because growing old doesn't
scare me, it's just that the
more space I put bet-
-ween myself and
the start, the
faster I
run
out
of
p
a
p
e
r.
Music is an art form that celebrates potential. So long as you're looking for it, you'll always find it.
Last edited by Mr.Pink101 at Mar 22, 2013,
#2
This is extremely creative! I love the style and the delivery of the message it was great. My only critique on this is "I don't ever want to grow up. Because growing old doesn't scare me," does not make much sense really. It's really "because" that throws it off. A word like "Well," might serve the role better.

Great piece though. I quite enjoyed this!