#1
Hey UG,

I recently added guitar, bass, and some misc other things to a track i had demo'd out months ago. I tried not to overproduce it, this is the first rough mix.
Please check it and tell me what you think. Anything that jumps out at you as inherently wrong is what I'm most interested in.

Thanks to any who listen, and C4C!

https://soundcloud.com/twelvetone/stealingthesun_3-22
Last edited by TV-Casualty at Mar 23, 2013,
#2
Very refreshing to be listening to something as mellow as this. Keep up the good work mate !
#3
All in all it's well recorded, The only thing that kinda bothered me was that I only heard the guitar on the left side, but maybe that's just me. And the arpegiated part gets a bit repetitive after a while, you might want to change it up a bit or add different accents, not much, just subtle variations will do.
#4
Thought it was pretty good. My only criticism would be that at first the drums come off a little strong, but the more I listen to it the more it fits. The harmonized vocals sound great. Overall it was a very pleasant sound.