At a stopping point with this, my first, track. I still feel like it needs work, whether it be mixing, or moving/ removing parts (I know in some sections it starts to feel too busy). I'm also not very satisfied with the lyrics or my vocal performance, but I felt like something needed to be there. Let me know what you think.
Last edited by Musty at Mar 23, 2013,
The vocal performance needs work. You are having pitch issues. Also, I felt like the lead playing was a little simplistic.

The mixing quality isn't the best, either. I kind of felt like everything was being played at the same level. It just sounded a little flat.

Thanks for your submission and allowing us the opportunity to critique it.
KG6 Thank you. I had a friend mix it for me, but like I said I feel it still needs some work. Even though I'm fairly new to the whole recording side of music if you have anything that you would like a crit on I'd be more than willing to.