#2
I love the clean guitar sound, but distortion disappoints me a bit (could be my death metal addiction ), it's not bad but it's a little bit "weak".
I also very much like the 1:49 radiofrequency-kinda effect.

You could have added some rhythmic variations or some quasi-breakdown, and try adding some vocals to it. I like the instrumental very much.

P.S. Can you tell me with what equipment did you record the clean intro?
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#4
Wow, it seems that I have really underestimated the power of modeling technology...
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#5
Overall composition is awesome! I really dig this kind of progressive music- reminded me a lot of protest the hero and the newer stuff from periphery.
Tones are really clear, but the distorted guitars sound a bit choppy... maybe go a little easy on the noise gate (i think)?
But yeh awesome composition and playing ability!

Mind checking out my song? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1594949
#6
Hey man! Really enjoyed this. More specifically 1:48 on was very much welcomed and very pleasing to listen to in my opinion! I do agree for some reason it feels like the guitar tone is missing something small. My ears are not that well trained though and I do not claim to be an expert by any means. thank you for sharing!