#1
Hi,

I'm currently a marine stationed in Okinawa, Japan. Whenever I'm not in the grime of working with electronics in military aviation I spend every second of my free time writing music. I really want to get some of music out there knowing that I live in range of North Korean missiles while being uncertain if they're going to snap or not. But whatever, check this shit out!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A8HzNLXQx54
#2
Really sounds good Marine. My only feedback would be the low riffs could be sharper, a little more crispness in the attack. And the whole arrangement begs for some soaring leads over it, ala Andy James if you intend to keep it as an instrumental piece. You definitely have the chops and good compositional skills. I'd love to hear another take with some lead work overlaid. Well done overall. Thanks for your service. Semper Fi!
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