#1
without mistake or error
it comes spilling out of you
even in hushed tones
you crack off like a cannon

you writing all this down?
freeze it in the ice
billions of snap decisions
all zero into one

progress, firm nonsense,
i am getting better.
context, first reject,
i am getting better.
hard shelf, strict pretense,
i am getting better.
quick flashes for quick access
we'll see who's really laughing


Bit of recycling with old ideas. I like it better this time round, and it fits better to music.
#2
I really like this, the stripped down tight choppy composition. Like sculpting with a chainsaw, no unnecessary frills, straight to the bone. The "I am getting better" refrain works really well too.