Well, the song doesn't really progress much throughout. Kind of just one long section so it might be good as like an interlude into another song. I liked your guitar playing, and the mixing with the acoustic delay thing going back and forth. The delay also helps the song sound a bit fuller, but I think you should also add some more instrumentation because as is the song isn't too exciting but i think some more instrumentation can really help here.
Short song so I don't really have much to say, eh.

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Came up with this idea yesternight at about 5 in the morning.

Lemme know what you think honestly and I wouldn't mind doing a C4C.

Much appreciated.


Cool dreamy idea. Delay times maybe should be shorter with more repeats. Id use an i electric for the delay guitar to avoid a muddle, but its a cool idea.