#2
Very awkward and somewhat out of tune. Your phrasing was there but youre picking at notes randomly.

Your tone also needs work. You certainly look very cool though.
Last edited by Sir-Shredalot at Apr 2, 2013,
#3
Quote by Sir-Shredalot
Very awkward and somewhat out of tune. Your phrasing was there but youre picking at notes randomly.

Your tone also needs work. You certainly look very cool though.


Thanks for the criticism, I'll definitely start working on the picking there.