#1
Every damn day
That I'm damned
Oppressors damn them they
Don't understand

That I'm
Just a man
I do
What I can

Every damn day
That I'm damned
I damn well let it
Well, I'll be damned

I shout damn
I shout damn
I shout damn - You
Yeah!
Last edited by treborillusion at Apr 2, 2013,
#4
C-c-c-combo breaker!

On topic, the
"Oppressors damn them they
Don't understand

That I'm
Just a man
I do
What I can"

part sounds a little bit emo-ish. Like newer linkin park stuff, if you get what I mean.
You could use some metaphors to make it sound badass.
Something like
"Masters of pain
Kill my being
To be unusable
Is a mortal sin" (I came up with this in 10 seconds)
Quote by ChemicalFire
You get my first ever lolstack






The image in my head is just too funny for words at this point


Aw yeah.