#2
Its like, the same section repeated three times. Maybe I have to like post-hardcore to understand this, but why is it one massive breakdown?
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#3
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Its like, the same section repeated three times. Maybe I have to like post-hardcore to understand this, but why is it one massive breakdown?


very constructive criticsm

I like playing sections i think sound good a lot. sue me
#5
I really like it actually. And though I usually dislike 90% of Epi's posts, I do agree that you recycle the riffs too much. It needs a bridge in between in, something to change the mood for a bit, then maybe bring the riffs back in. Right now it's just 3 riffs and some expanded motifs basically. Have a section in there that completely contrasts what's going on, like a clean break with lots of ambience and less present drumwork.