Minderbinder
The Central Scrutinizer
Join date: Nov 2006
563 IQ
#3
Very nicely done; the embellishments are all tasteful and you have a good sense of timing throughout. The only critique I might add is that your touch seems a little hard in some places. Overall very good job.
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