#1
This is one of a couple of acoustic songs which are basically in the same mood I'm working on at the moment, I can dig it but I'm not sure if it's interesting enough, I do feel like it might be a bit anticlimactic as well
Any opinions?
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#2
I really didn't mind it, there was some odd dissonance in the section starting at measure 25, more specifically measure 31 and each time it repeated.
Other than that I thought was pretty good. I understand what you mean by it being anticlimactic, but at the same time I didn't really feel like it built up too much where it really needed something big to finish.
#3
I really enjoyed this, it reminds me of 90s emo quite a lot, I expect to hear Mike Kinsella whine over the top of it. The weird dissonance is kind of off putting but not completely disgusting. Some more technical drumming could be a nice attribution to it too, just added fills etc, the drum patterns blend into the background pretty well and don't disrupt it. I do agree with Metabolic though, I wouldn't say it was anticlimactic because it didn't really feel like it was building to a crescendo or anything, it was just chill all the way through, and it ended consistently. I'd like to hear this recorded!
#4
Fell asleep to this yesterday, so thank you for that (couldn't get to sleep the last 2 days, thank you so much!), sounds very chill and very relaxed, even though there's stuff going on almost all the time.

Pretty melodies and I don't think you need a climax in that song at all, I'd just keep it as is and be happy about it, especially the pattern starting at around bar 65 onwards
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