doubtfulsalmon
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Join date: Jan 2011
628 IQ
#1
infatuation
called for a kiss
on her Bostik lips.
i kneel and

Vomit

Concrete

At her

Feet.

with tongues
slaking lime,
i chokingly grit
and aggregate:

"Don't Bother Clearing Up"
Banjocal
UG's only only
Join date: Sep 2009
1,174 IQ
#2
vomit concrete at here feet

Oh god I love it. I can imagine this being sung harmoniously over some sort of mix of lantlos and my bloody valentine.

also, is your UN a reference to Adams?
Green_Ghoul
Registered User
Join date: Aug 2010
3,307 IQ
#4
I really like it, there really isn't much to say as far as suggestions go.

would you mind giving mine a look?